Why You Should You Never listen to a Book Critic or a Literature Professor!

Only Paul Graham, the English programmer, essayist and venture capitalist would explain Evan Mwangi’s attack on Tony Mochama’s book, Nairobi: A Night Through the City in the Sun. It was totally uncalled for. Today, I would like to defend Mochama and other men and women of his ilk who write what academics usually dismiss as populist fiction/writings. But first, have a look at this hierarchy. If not clear, just google, it: Paul Graham Hierarchy of Disagreement.

                                                          Graham's_Hierarchy_of_Disagreement-en.svgPaul Graham’s hierachy of disagreement.


Jackson Biko, The Nation columnist, is easily one of the most celebrated writers in the country currently.  Whereas, he is necessarily restrained in his newspaper articles owing to the moralistic sensibilities that national newspapers must honour, in his blog, he is unchained and commands a huge following.

He has won the Kenyan Bloggers’ Award (BAKE) for creative writing for three consecutive years, since its inception in 2012. Although the awards come with a lot of self-promotion, there is no overstating of Biko’s ability. He charms our dreary lives weekly or as frequently as possible with wit, humour and a remarkable eye for observing what drives Kenyans, especially Nairobians. The blog is one of the most read, most shared on social media.

Twice in recent times, Biko has thrust himself into the national arena because of his blog. In September 16th last year, he wrote a blog titled ‘Visa Denied’ that went viral, exposing the usually  insulting procedures that as Kenyans and many Africans are subjected to various consulates, before we travel to their countries in the West (and South Africa, annoyingly). The piece provoked national ire that even saw the British envoy write what read like an apology to Biko. With just that, he brought home one of the uglier aspects modern immigration that we are often forced to put up.

To underscore Biko’s sphere of influence, he recently helped raise Sh 6.4 million within just 48 hours to help Emanuel Otieno (famously known as Jadudi)  undergo his fourth brain surgery in India. The money was more than the Sh 1 million requested by Jadudi. The 22-year old is back in the country and recently thanked Kenyans for their generous contributions that have given him another shot at life.  With a single blog post, Biko helped the young university student, exposed the rot in our health system, the defective and ineffective health insurance that has made Kenyan rely more on fundraisers and going abroad for treatment.

Some of Biko’s blogs are masterpieces that can be taught in any literature class in the world. The comments in his blogs tell as much. Yet, in Kenya, no literature professor will pick them for a creative writing class. The blogs carry style, technique and a unique voice all of which are essentials taught in class. Except the professors in the Kenyan class rooms are still stuck up with colonial days’s writers and 20th century European and American poets. God forbid. Some literary critics will shun him and dismiss the blog in its entirety. If he was white, may be, they will take him seriously.

I write this because a fortnight or so ago, Professor Evan Mwangi, opened an unwarranted attack on Tony Mochama and his book, Nairobi: A Night Runner’s Guide Through A City In The Sun. By subjecting the book to literary criticism,  Prof Mwangi behaved like a cricket umpire refereeing a football match. For Mochama’s book was supposed to be an entertaining guide around Nairobi, not necessarily a literary gem. Mochama, who has used the moniker ‘Night Runner’ since the early 2000s, is well known for his nightly exploits that he often shares in newspaper columns.

The book under attack, if read objectively is part an encyclopaedia of the Nairobi social scene, a criticism of what is wrong and right about our society, the enduring entrepreneurial spirit of Kenya-regardless of the choice of business, pointers to poverty, desperation, disillusionment, our shared humanity-such as Mochama running into a homeless tramp in a first world country (Montreal-Canada), who he gives a two dollar coin, and concludes that he is going to buy liquor instead of medication. A better critic will try and discern if Mochama’s observations a re a true reflection of the Kenyan society.

Mochama and Biko are the Charles Dickens and William Thackerays of our time, recording the anxieties, tensions and the decadences of our time. Often, good writers are usually celebrated in retrospect. It used to be this way and for long we were stuck with Shakespeare as the best thing that ever happened to literature. But now, younger generation know what is good for them, and will soon pick a popular novel than be stuck with an awarding winning abstract novel that you need pain killers to read from cover to cover.

Critics play no role in our lives whatsoever

Critically acclaimed and commercially successful writers are always in agreement that critics serve no useful purpose, whatsoever. Ken Follett, the British thriller novelist in a 2001, New York Times interview, told the interviewer,

“I am so focused on pleasing the reader that any good criticism is important to me. I admit I know best. The decision to take the advice remains with me.”

Most critics are spoilt brats, favoured by institutions and privilege who try to dictate tastes, yet their literary gourmet is not universally acceptable. It is never accessible (physically and literary). The critic or the professor bearing theory, ready to kill your dream is mostly in the confines of the university walls, still teaching Shakespeare and Chekhov. From these ivory towers, they pontificate but nobody cares really. How many Literature Nobel laureates do you know?

A typically respected critic comes from a reputable institution in the country, highly intoxicated on Literary Theory, that act as a lens from which he views the world. Very few African critics have even come up with any discernible theory. To a writer and a reader, you do not need a theory to write or read every book. If anything theory ruins the pleasure of reading.

Some of the books, art, and music usually spurned by critics, end up getting the best reception from the real, thinking crowds.  They end up raking millions, leaving critics with eggs on their faces. Literary tastes, are highly subjective. And your PhD in Literature does not mean that your tastes are better than an accountant savouring a Stephen King book. Bottom line, are you enjoying whatever that you are reading. If Rihanna has more fans on YouTube and you don’t necessarily like her music, that does not make the millions who listen or dance to her dunderheads.

And the difference between traditional critics and the direction the world is headed was best brought home by William Deresiewicz, writing in The Atlantic in the January/February issue of this year. The illuminating article titled, ‘The Death of the Artist—and the Birth of the Creative Entrepreneur’ is a must read for critics and artists alike.

Deresiewicz, argued that the web has democratised tastes and has made everyone an artist, they ever wanted to be. Think of bloggers, Instagram photographers, YouTube artists and their ilk. If they listened to critics,  some of the innocuous and childish things that we share on WhatsApp, Facebook and Twitter that make our days, will not exist.

Despite their perishability, they do earn some of creators good publicity and money. Even better, they are better social critics for creating material that is accessible to the common man, than the obfuscate academic papers that the critics write and shelve in their departmental libraries. A clever satirical tweet, sardonic cartoon, or a telling meme about Moses Kuria or Trump portraying their shenanigans,  is worth a thousand academic papers written by the critic that no one will read.

“Another word for gatekeepers is experts,” wrote Deresiewicz, pointing out that when the Modern Library asked its editorial board to select the 100 best novels of the 20th century, the top choice was (James Joyce’s) Ulysses. In a companion poll of readers, it was (Ayn Rand’s)  Atlas Shrugged…Prizes belong to the age of professionals. All we’ll need to measure merit soon is the best-seller list.

Makes perfect sense. How many books by Nobel laureates have you read? But you have probably read and enjoyed books by the popular fiction writers flood the market. Mario Puzo’s Godfather will remain a classic for long time yet, it will never be approved into a class of literature even as some out of tune, grey-haired professor who has never heard of Facebook selects for the umpteenth time another Shakespeare book for a class read. For heaven sake, try Ferdinand Oyono’s Houseboy. A swear word, does not make a book any less readable or desirable. Such kind of Victorian puritanism is what killed the reading culture in Kenya. For books deemed literary-worth can be a painful read, you need pain killers to finish them.

And that is the road, Prof Evan Mwangi and literature professors want to take us. Even as they look to the West for direction, they should try and see some of the writers who went off the tangent such as William S Burroughs, Hunter S Thompson, Jack Kerouac among other Beat Generation writers,are studied in American Universities. They produced a literature that defined their generation that was characterised  by defiance and what came to be known as the counterculture movement.

Mochama and a host of new writers in Kenya are trying to disrupt the old models of telling stories that never worked. We can’t keep killing their dreams by subjecting their material to this kind of destructive criticism that Mwangi thrives in. It never helped anyone.

No writer has made critics more irrelevant than the novelist American novelist James Patterson who the Vanity Fair has dubbed the Henry Ford of Books. The former ad man turned novelist is now one of the bestselling authors fetching millions and living a life, no critic will ever dream about much less live. He is doing things (starting the ReadKiddoRead website, for parents looking for good books for their children, setting up the James Patterson Teacher Education Scholarship in the schools of education in two universities in the states and a college scholarship program) that no critic can even try.

Lisa Scottonline, famous for her legal thrillers, has previously praised Patterson in the Washington Post review of his Kill Alex Cross novel, saying his tens of millions fans can’t be wrong.

“They used to say 50 million Elvis Presley fans couldn’t be wrong, and James Patterson makes 50 million fans look like a good start, he has sold more than 230 million books, and his fans aren’t wrong, either.”

That is what it is. Fans, if they are happy, then write for them. Ignore the critic. Create for them to criticise. By creating, you are being charitable enough, giving them a job that gives them relevance and bread.

One last thing, critics sometimes are failed writers. Their books or attempts at creative writing never worked and you can never rule out the aspect of sour grapes when critiquing award-winning writers. Just a polite reminder to them: There is no monopoly for taste.

Mochama is an award winning writer. We love him and we don’t need to be taught on how to read him.

I’m currently pursuing my Masters in Science in Journalism at Columbia University, New York.

Email: son2107@columbia.edu.


Tragedy: When your male friends own a car and you don’t

If you are a man, one of the uglier truths you have to contend with is that one of your friends will buy or acquire a car before you do. The way life is structured, it is always the arseholes, guys full of themselves (read sh*t) who get a ride before you do.

You never realise how stupid, competitive and randy a man can be until he acquires his first car. First he assumes a position of power. Then he gets horny and feels entitled to all the women he never had a chance to sleep with when he was a broke, unremarkable man. Now that he owns a car, he assumes that every other male friend who does not own a car should be his pimp and errand boy. In exchange for the women he wants and the favour, he occasionally drops you home, buys you beer and if reasonable (they rarely are, he may let you have the car to go visit your crush in Embakasi). A tyipical Friday call goes like…

“Hey yo! Silo, whatsapp! I have a ride, si utafute mabinti hapo ukam tukamate madrinks huku…”

Because you are broke, the sound of free drinks jolts into action. You scroll through your phone, looking for turn-up squad, like…

Sheila…No, last time she threw up in front of dignitaries, when she could not handle her drinks.

Anne…Oh no, once high she dances like she is auditioning for a Vybez Kartel video.

Ruth…Besides her anachronistic name, she is a bore.

You scroll some more until you settle for Barbara, Victoria and another one with an unlikely name such as Shawna. All of them are available of course. Thank heavens for turn-up squad- the women ever so available, even on a random, mid-month Monday, granted drinks will flow. Better still, they crossed that sexual threshold of caring about the body count; they can sleep with any man, anywhere, anyhow.

So you turn up in town. You ask your boy, where in town it is appropriate for the night out. Because such men have no sense of style, they will choose Tribeka. Or if they went to Maseno or Moi University, they have no sense of choice, class or taste, they will pick any new club along Moi Avenue, that is will be full by 5.30 p.m. (Guys have your kid bros and cuzos go attend University of Nairobi, Strathmore or USIU).

Anyway, you settle for Tribeka, and take some seats next to the balcony at about 6.33 p.m. The ladies are all fresh and clean, straight from the bathroom,  one even has some soap foam in her left ear, you help her wipe it out.

By the time your friend with a car calls you that he is around, you have thrown the first round with the only Sh 1,000 you had, thankful that no chick went for shots. Or Amarula (oh, by the way I gather that according to the latest Kenya Gazette,Roberto’s Amarula is the new Ratchet’s anthem)

He is looking for parking, you have to go down and help him bribe some Kisii watchman so that he can park his Subaru, or any starter car that young men buy these days. You park the car and go up. He says ‘hi’ to the girls, takes a hug from one and takes a seat next to Shawna, who inspects his watch and hair cut and you notice she broaches herself to him, beating Victoria and Barbara, to the bastard. But you know your boy Richard’s taste, he will certainly pick Victoria. He always liked them lighter. But since he is a fool, he will spend his first 30 minutes updating sh*t on Instagram and Facebook. You are growing impatient, but he has a ride and he will take his time. When he feels like, he will dictate all of you around like his dogs and bitches because he is buying the drinks. There is no abusive relationship in this world like the one where you are being bought drinks in exchange for small favours.

The fool, will decide to buy a few more rounds and join the conversation from time to time. The din from the nearby speaker, makes any discernible conversation impossible. Talking over loud music in a night club is another reminder of our failure at thinking as human beings. Often, it futile The fool knows you are his subjects, so he will go back to Instagram and Facebook to see how many likes he has garnered since his last post 17 minutes ago and spend 23 more minutes.

You will have to put up with his asinine behaviour. He can’t even make a move because he knows he has a ride, and he will get his way. You silently wish that Nairobi women sometimes didn’t give in too easily to men just because the man bought beer and he owns a car and lives in a one bedroom apartment in South B. But hey!

There is no reasonable talk that will happen in that evening. You will be keeping vigil, having small talk with the girls, who by now will be bored out of their nose rings and totally distracted by the horny guys with disgusting grins in the next table. It is not their faulty at all.

As it happens, in your next coincidental visit to the gents,the foolish car owner will ask you a brief bio of all the turn squad.He wants to bag or is it shag the sexiest. You obligingly give him all the details he wants. Because he has a car. Not that he is necessarily handsome. Not that he is any clever. If anything, he is ugly, has a potbelly, and calculus tormented him in the Math class. But with a car and money, he has erased any doubts of his low IQ and his nonsensical paunch from his head, he thinks he is the sexiest gift to all women in Nairobi. You loathe his guts.

When you go back, he calls his other friend drinking in another club. The friend drives a better car, a Prado, that means he is a monumental arsehole, equally entitled. The friend arrives with another unremarkable, forgettable man. Without so much as a preamble, they charm themselves to the ladies in the table. The ladies notice (somehow turn-up squad can detect real money from the colour and texture of cuff-links) and they run to the bathroom for some more sprucing and come back, well-powdered, to audition themselves. Tonight, you have done your job. You realise that throughout their forays tonight, the two men just arrived have not been lucky to get some cheap lay. They look the type who pass by Koinange St (in 2015), where they only bump into tired watchmen sipping under-brewed tea, sneezing into the night and one call girl, too old to be in the street. Then they go to Hurlingham, where they are lucky to find some commercial sex worker who is intoxicated, she should fire herself from the job. But tonight, they have seen the ladies and by the alcohol the women are soaking, the men automatically know, it is turn up squad. And that is when they all do away with you.

It is 12.37 a.m, the La Liga match you have been following is long over and there are a couple of replays in various screens. You don’t want to watch a replay of Arsenal and Man U, those goals by Sanchez were disrespectful. You turn to watch the screen airing National Geographic and at this point of the slow night, they are airing something about the slowest snails in Amazon Forest.

The men are getting cozy with women, it is like you don’t exist. They are squeezing in the limited space to dance to some Radio and Weasel song banging from the speakers. Guys are copulating in the name of dancing in the club. You endure the sweating, the sins, the demons, because you have to satisfy the ego of your friends because they own damn cars. Life!

Since they are fools, they can’t cut to the chase, owing to their obvious lack of seductive charm, they have to make sure the women are as drunk as possible. You hate it. Presently, they have squandered like Sh 9,000 and counting. They buy you another drink. Another hour and you are bored out of your teeth. You tell your friend you want to go. They all debate and the women ask you their annoying and profoundly fake,

“Are you OK? Silas?”


The men ask you why you acting like the wettest blanket, you tell them, you fine, you just wanna go home. You walk down with your boy. He wants to drop you in your apartment in Donholm, but no man who recently bought a car drops friends in Donholm. No.

South B? Yes. South C? Yes.  Langata? Yes. Thika Road? Mmmmh, may be up to Roysambu. Past Roysambu? NO! Eastlands? Hell NOOOOO.

So he opts to take you to a taxi and offers to pay the Sh 800 to the taxi guy. After bargaining to the point of abusing the taxi guy,he grudgingly accepts Sh 800.

Now thing with taxi guys, they can be arseholes, when they notice that you are man and cab fare was paid for you. So given the insult from the friend-and the taxi guy, being an elderly Kikuyu man-is not impressed. He will drive at his pace, not talking to you. When he gets to your apartment, that is tucked in some corner, in the midst of 23 other apartments, he is impatient as shi* as you direct him,
“Hiyo, apartment next, ah ah ah!, hiyo ingine, ….songa hiyo next…”

He gets more impatient, and erupts,

“Kwani haujui kwako?”, you want to insult him, but you think twice and get off, go to your house. Counting losses. You have only drunk Sh 3 bottles, worth Sh 690. And you spent Sh 1,000 on the ladies who all left with the men.


This is for men who do not own car, being misused by men who own a car.

If a man without car, resist the temptation of free ride and free booze. Don’t be their pimp

Free drinks come at a cost. And great inconvenience. Beware.